Hi Carmena. Thanks for sharing these headlines on your sales funnel opt-in page. Great progress on this. I personally liked the third one but I wouldn’t put 16 reasons.

I would put the ultimate reason. “The reason that”, and “all the reasons”, you know, something more intriguing than 16 reasons why thousands of people are changing their destiny and how you can join the revolution.

The top two were good. I think there’s still a bit too busy, but looking at this page asking the question, Have you had enough? Are you done? Because if you’re really done, you’re ready.

That’s good. Then it goes into PTSD, impulse control, and other disorders. I think this is slightly too busy and I would definitely remove this “And now yoga” because yeah, move on now yoga.

This question’s good. But I would add something here, ‘discover something’, ‘discover the ultimate reason’, and then ‘discover the ultimate reason why thousands of people are changing their destiny and how you can join the revolution’.

Or discover the tool. So here I would have ‘discover the tool’. Yeah, ‘discover the ultimate reason why thousands of people are changing their destiny and how you can join the revolution.

MDs, psychiatrists, prison chaplins, teachers, therapists, and activists are using the same tool to fight these worldwide issues. I’d remove ‘and now yoga’.

Cause you mentioned it here. I’d definitely move that. I wouldn’t say ‘help us with our film at this point’ as well. I would allude them that more on the second page, I would just put, ‘get instant access to the trailer of and now yoga.

Send me the video and I would put free video reveals and small text here, a small, small sub-headline. Free video reveals, discover how MDs, psychiatrists, prison chaplins, teachers, therapists, and therapists are using this tool to fight worldwide issues.

I don’t think we have to mention this too much either. I think this gets mentioned in the trailer and then I would take out help us with our film and allude to that more on the second page once they’ve opted in.

Cause remember they’re just only interested in what they can get out of it really. So it’s to discover the tool to fight these worldwide issues and, and maybe alluded to this slightly. So send me the video now where it’s going to show you how this tool is going to fix your issue basically.

And then you can allude to the prospect, sorry. You can allude to how the trailer and that tool helps that individual without a specific disorder. Again it’s too busy again.

The question’s good here. So have you had enough all you’ve done because if you’re already done, you’re ready. Then free video reveals, discover how MD psychiatrists, prison chaplins teachers, therapists, and activates.

I’ve probably shortened this down as well. Are using the same tool to fight these worldwide issues. Get instant access to the trailer of and now yoga.

Send me the video. So I would really shorten it down, make it more simple than understand and comprehend because it’s too much information going on on the screen.

Yeah. See what you think of that. Maybe edit the opt-in page to what I’ve suggested there and then we can have another look at it. Cheers, Mina.